Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. XXX Hot Video Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. cant wait for the next one .. cant wait for the next one .. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. great work«12» great work«12» Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … great work«12» Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. great work«12» cant wait for the next one .. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-08 23:50:22And I was just wndoering about that too!READERReport 2007-06-09 19:00:59awfulREADERReport 2004-09-18 16:03:08Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off.
