Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. Other than that, good job. Hot xxx You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. More please !«1234» 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good.
