Gave it a 5.READERReport 2005-12-23 14:35:21That was a lovely storey and now I want to find the other ones
by this talented young lady – she has already made my pussy all wet and longing for her tongue! Hot xxx 18 It’s too mushy, too childish, and it’s probably all bullshit. 3 comments«1»READERReport 2007-09-15 15:57:00Over 13,000 viewers and only 2 now 3 comments. She gets a 10 from meREADERReport 2005-08-23 17:41:26The story would have been a lot better if the writing had been much better than it was. She gets a 10 from meREADERReport 2005-08-23 17:41:26The story would have been a lot better if the writing had been much better than it was. That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. The writing errors detracted from the story.«1»