4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-29 18:46:44once again we get left hanging by a wannabe hack that can’t finish a simple story WHAT A WASTE OF TIME.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-27 05:03:30Great story loved the detailanonymous readerReport 2011-07-29 13:28:14if this is your first ORIGINAL story does that mean the other one is STOLEN?Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 04:22:33You need to be more descriptive. Hot xxx Describe the characters more, and put more detail into the sex. it was kind of unsatisfying because you had a relativley long intro but a short sex scene. it was kind of unsatisfying because you had a relativley long intro but a short sex scene. if you put more time into it, your stories could be good.«1» if you put more time into it, your stories could be good.«1»
