2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 08:54:493rd part of a 3 part story you idiotanonymous readerReport 2013-02-16 21:04:09A little to short and it could use a little more buildup, but showing some promise.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 08:54:493rd part of a 3 part story you idiotanonymous readerReport 2013-02-16 21:04:09A little to short and it could use a little more buildup, but showing some promise.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 08:54:493rd part of a 3 part story you idiotanonymous readerReport 2013-02-16 21:04:09A little to short and it could use a little more buildup, but showing some promise.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 08:54:493rd part of a 3 part story you idiotanonymous readerReport 2013-02-16 21:04:09A little to short and it could use a little more buildup, but showing some promise.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 08:54:493rd part of a 3 part story you idiotanonymous readerReport 2013-02-16 21:04:09A little to short and it could use a little more buildup,
