Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-23 00:34:50Thanks Nikki, I liked it very much.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 03:04:40sick fucking white pig fucking the nigger. Hot xxx . . . . . . … Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work.«1» Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work.«1» Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction.
