You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. XXX Hot HD Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. ‘Its tits WHERE tightly…and THE tied…’, ‘…before the house went QUITE.’,
‘It felt hands on IT body…’, ‘Dinner is SERVICED…’, ‘…before BRING it to…’, etc, etc.
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