5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 10:37:50ok a decent start to the story so far, enjoying itAnonymous readerReport 2013-05-29 18:40:14chapter 3 is also now up for you all and that has some fun stuff in it for all you horn dogs out thereAnonymous readerReport 2013-05-29 15:36:52thanks I do do the writing outside of the browser interface but when i bring it in I don’t know why but sometimes I loose punctuation for some reason. Keep it up.okieblueyesReport 2013-05-29 14:47:13you are doing great , keep the chapters coming«1» Just make sure to pull any formatting out of the text so that you do not expect anything special to be posted. XXX Hot Video Keep it up.okieblueyesReport 2013-05-29 14:47:13you are doing great , keep the chapters coming«1» so if you see a run on that looks like it should be 2 sentences imagine a period somewhere cause it was there when I wrote
