Good luck!anonymous readerReport 2012-02-28 23:37:58Your moving along a tad bit to fast…anonymous readerReport 2012-02-23 18:16:32Beautiful but the events are happening to rapidly you could have a book published from this if you continue the good work«12» It’s why I write scifantasy. Hot xxx It’s important to make sure you know what kind of a story format your writing in and keep to it. It’s important to make sure you know what kind of a story format your writing in and keep to it. It’s important to make sure you know what kind of a story format your writing in and keep to it. “First person shooter” is inside their head, using “I did” “I saw” “I broke his neck.” A lot of people tend to forget which mode they are writing in.And yes I’m a nerd.
