you write,And just as they were losing patience with me I
yelled louder than anytime before, and forced out a load of nut
juice.READERReport 2006-08-23 10:57:23i’ve read them all so far and commrnted on a few. Hot xxx you have great potential in these stories. instead of saying: As I pummled in out out of her hot sweet cunt, I could begin to feel the deep powerful sensation of my final orgasm building,. . . . . . . … also you might want to describe your penis that you hold in such high regard to make it seem more descriptive and attentive however i will continue to read , all in all 6 out of 10READERReport 2006-08-24 01:32:31complete bullshit, you have a great outline and you have to ruin it by using so little description of what the character feels or the erotic, sensual potential the stories could have.
