A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story). Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Hot xxx Are Ganonymous readerReport 2012-05-13 10:18:34both tina and gina should get pregnant with the father’s babyanonymous readerReport 2011-02-08 06:45:39agian a bid to rushed some part. calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. You drained yourself telling the first part of the story so there was nothing left for the sweet part.«12» She needed that cock and then, when you finally gave it to her it was over in a squirt.
