Rates eight stars, but the author has a great flar for story telling.READERReport 2005-06-29 12:28:13Okay story but was very short… XXX Hot Rates eight stars, but the author has a great flar for story telling.READERReport 2005-06-29 12:28:13Okay story but was very short… 1)not a very good background for a romance 2) not really all that interesting, not many details. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-15 01:57:42ok i have about 100 comments for you. do not write a story unless you are gonna put some time and effort into it.READERReport 2005-07-15 23:14:44It was a great story until you mentioned the bi thing not everyone wants to hear that, but keep writingREADERReport 2005-07-01 11:20:12Keepim cumming, A great story, but a little short like everything less. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-15 01:57:42ok i have about 100 comments for you. keep writingREADERReport 2005-06-27 23:12:59loved it more more more and tease tease tesae me dont let these ppl get to
