it’s not romantic in any way and definatelly not something i would encourage the author to write again. of any kind.chreese1Report 2011-05-24 07:45:21Great story keep up the great work, very romantic and erotic.«12» Instead of lovebites your name should be love to write sucky stories. Hot xxx word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little bit moreanonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:49:03needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. This shit sucks! 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little bit moreanonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:49:03needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer.
