Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. XXX Hot I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1»
