xDREADERReport 2005-09-28 22:15:11Pretty good, but practice on your writing skills, you miss spelled all the way through, but it seems like it was all your experience, good to read though. The beginning of the second paragraph is not easy to follow. XXX Hot HD The beginning of the second paragraph is not easy to follow. xDREADERReport 2005-09-28 22:15:11Pretty good, but practice on your writing skills, you miss spelled all the way through, but it seems like it was all your experience, good to read though. More lengthy description would be nice.«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-10 11:35:49LOLOL what the hell is 9 inches and 3 inches long?? Don’t make it too obvious that you’ve only recently been weaned off Barbie dolls.READERReport 2004-07-07 08:17:07Hey, This is a good story, but you need to edit it for gramer.
