It did exactly what it is supposed to do…trust me. …«12» So its not a story someone sat down and wrote so it will be more sloppy written. XXX Hot The story was really good in mh opinion and should hav a second part.READERReport 2007-02-07 19:15:37This was a very interesting story and you should write moreREADERReport 2006-10-18 22:20:14thank you wickedsin 🙂 it’s sad they couldnt appreciate it…oh well at least me and you didREADERReport 2006-10-18 18:34:54Baby Girl…don’t worry about their comments…I think they failed to see this is a role play chat with you and your bf, not an actual piece of crafted literature. So its not a story someone sat down and wrote so it will be more sloppy written.
