7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . XXX Hot HD . … Your suggestions are lame. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. “Female, 23, brn hair, grn eyes, 5’4” 125 lbs, 34C. Your suggestions are lame. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. This story has definite potential. Your suggestions are lame. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is
