Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. XXX Hot HD wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. And erm (01-03-05). He’s only 11 when he wrote it! He nvr said it was real. 43 comments«12345»Kiba SnowpawReport 2019-03-10 10:27:15I’m terrible at writing stories, but I’m pretty sure I could do a better job than this. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! He’s only 11 when he wrote it! FFS dont try
