Perhaps try and find someone to proof read for you, and also try and read more other stories (not necessarily sex stories) to get a better grasp of the sentence structures. Something different is nice.«1» The grammar is a little off, though its probably no worse than some people who have english as their first language. XXX Hot The grammar is a little off, though its probably no worse than some people who have english as their first language. Something different is nice.«1» 2 comments«1»READERReport 2007-11-18 18:28:28good job very originalREADERReport 2007-01-08 18:01:59Wow, what a great story. The grammar is a little off, though its probably no worse than some people who have english as their first language.
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