Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» you got the two mixed up.READERReport 2007-08-17 17:09:27You left it open so you have a chance to improve, proofread, spellcheck, extend your plot, give it some more time and you should be fine. Hot xxx Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» the story sounded like someone very very young wrote it. you got the two mixed up.READERReport 2007-08-17 17:09:27You left it open so you have a chance to improve, proofread, spellcheck, extend your plot, give it some more time and you should be fine. Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123»
