I especially love the composition of the squatting down by the colorful trees.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-07 03:52:06good story and very well planned out but I’d suggest that you make it longer and add more detail to the characters.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 20:19:59Great story. I especially love the composition of the squatting down by the colorful trees.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-07 03:52:06good story and very well planned out but I’d suggest that you make it longer and add more detail to the characters.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 20:19:59Great story. XXX Hot Video The boy mom in you defneitily shows in your work you relate so well! anyways good story, I think you did a decent job with it, cant wait to read chapter 2, off to read it now.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-01 20:07:14Beautiful images Lisa. anyways good story, I think you did a decent job with it, cant wait to read chapter 2, off to read it
