I think your writing style sucks. So really take to heart what a previous poster said “grammar, horrible. XXX Hot HD punctuation, dreadful.” Work on that and spelling and maybe I can get through your story without getting annoyed.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-11 03:40:31grammer, horrible. it would have been alot stupider if amber just moved in for no apparent reason, and the grammer was not that bad, well atleast not bad enough that i actually had to try and interpret things, as i usually have to on this siteAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-11 13:42:20Ok, I’m gonna be very honest with you… and give the guy a break about the justice system thing, he obviously doesn’t know, but i respect him for trying to use it as a backstory. Just the setup is a bit poor. So really take to heart what a previous poster said “grammar, horrible.
