It’s like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one big paragraph to get it over with. XXX Hot HD really strange!ImpaxReport 2012-04-17 12:03:16I gave it a pos vote, but only for the beginning. the rushed unrealistic end was a real turn off and to top it off you FAILED to give a second chapter and proper end. You have a lot of talent; please don’t take any more shortcuts and cheat everyone involved, including the characters you made us care about.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-09 15:51:56ruined by the end and lack of a proper finish as usual for this writer negative 50«12345» the rushed unrealistic end was a real turn off and to top it off you FAILED to give a second chapter and proper end.
