Beautifully written.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-16 01:45:48Wonderful as always, but as another person said, finishing the story left me with a strange, mildly unpleasant feeling. Don’t change a thing with your writing style; even the somewhat less than perfect, yet realistic endings add a level of depth that most stories on this sight are missing. XXX Hot HD ficiotn or fact doesn’t rally matter to me. 19 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-20 23:43:40That was a sensational story, beautifully written, flowed perfectly, I don’t think I’ve read such an accomplished story here, you should never stop writing you have a great talent ! I agree with 3 below me I did have a strange uneasy feeling at the end, maybe its the cheating or maybe, as he said he didn’t cheat as he’d not fucked her pussy, but he made slow romantic love to her the last time and that’s definitely
