31 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-10 00:06:24Don’t ever make it fucking 2nd person always make these stories first or fucking third!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-06-10 00:06:24Don’t ever make it fucking 2nd person always make these stories first or fucking third!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-06-07 15:37:56pretty good should have more detail on the part where they fuck
use of you=not good
5/10anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 16:42:35strange writing. First time i see a story using “you” but not as bad as some guys saidanonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 16:42:15strange writing. XXX Hot HD 31 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-10 00:06:24Don’t ever make it fucking 2nd person always make these stories first or fucking third!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-06-10 00:06:24Don’t ever make it fucking 2nd person always make these stories first or fucking third!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-06-07 15:37:56pretty good should have more detail on the part where they fuck
use of you=not good
5/10anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 16:42:35strange writing.
