4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-30 12:29:20Need to really work on your grammar you are missing a lot of words in the middle of sentinces. plus it feels like you are trying to speed through the story to rush and get it over, which makes me as a reader feel if you have no patience to take the time to write out the story then why should I bother wasting my time reading it.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-21 19:12:48haha joke story, keep up the good workanonymous readerReport 2013-01-20 09:39:17THIS STORY IS . Hot xxx 18 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …GOODanonymous readerReport 2013-01-19 12:18:47This story is. plus it feels like you are trying to speed through the story to rush and get it over, which makes me as a reader feel if you have no patience to take the time to write out the story then why should I bother wasting my time reading it.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-21 19:12:48haha joke
