The story does have potential though, keep writing.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:43:03Actually, Silver Hair, his step-daughter Katie had C-cups, and the friend, Kelly, had D-cups, and the author made reference to them being the same size as his WIFE Clair who has D-cups …maybe you should take some notes moron.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:30:22Titman Al write your own stories. XXX Hot HD Your suggestions are lame. but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … i give it a 7 .. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … The story does have potential though, keep writing.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:43:03Actually, Silver Hair, his step-daughter Katie had C-cups, and the friend, Kelly,
