I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story. XXX Hot HD Please make a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 04:51:42Consider a lot of anal and some pee play too«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-03 04:04:33the paragraphs are a little long. I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me shake my head and leave.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 19:07:46A little quick to the action but still pretty damn good. add some spaces. add some spaces. Please make a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 04:51:42Consider a lot of anal and some pee play too«12» Please make a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 04:51:42Consider a lot of anal and some pee play too«12» I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me
