C’ mon get real. XXX Hot At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. It was not a good story and the writer needs to do a lot more practicing before resubmitting if he ever wants to be a good writer.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-18 12:30:47good story made me rock hard the same thing sort of happend to meMuckerReport 2010-12-17 14:45:34Good story but it could benefit from proof reading and spell check. Also some lengthier and more detailed descriptions of the sexual activity would have improved the story and made it more erotic.«12»
