writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. XXX Hot rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. Pt.2 plzREADERReport 2007-05-31 07:57:03I thought it was awesome. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice. I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. Pt.2 plzREADERReport 2007-05-31 07:57:03I thought it was awesome. And oral cavity? its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt.
