You don’t know what words to capitalize or how to pluralize (most words are pluralized by adding “s”, or “ies”, but never ” ‘s”. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 17:45:09You really need to proofread and edit this BEFORE posting it. XXX Hot 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 17:45:09You really need to proofread and edit this BEFORE posting it. This will improve them greatly. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 17:45:09You really need to proofread and edit this BEFORE posting it. You don’t know what words to capitalize or how to pluralize (most words are pluralized by adding “s”, or “ies”, but never ” ‘s”. You have a lot of improperly used punctuation marks. Your creative idea is good, but you really need help in getting it into a nice readable form.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 14:01:05You need to use tags.«1» You don’t know what words to capitalize or how to pluralize (most words
