The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. XXX Hot Run-on sentences it could be an interesting read. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. Run-on sentences it could be an interesting read.
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