Also, why were two paragraphs repeated in the story.«12345» u overdid the incestuous lust bit!READERReport 2005-08-11 01:18:13Drty Dan’s a cockbite in his own. Loved the storyREADERReport 2005-06-09 08:32:07Not bad. XXX Hot HD 9/10READERReport 2005-06-27 12:07:25My three older brothers did me like that forl years. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. 9/10READERReport 2005-06-27 12:07:25My three older brothers did me like that forl years. I have been fucking my sister for yearss and she weould never refer to me as “my brother”. loved it. I have been fucking my sister for yearss and she weould never refer to me as “my brother”. A bit of dialogue issues, and some proofreading stuff, but other than that, great. 9/10READERReport 2005-06-27 12:07:25My three older brothers did me like that forl years. Also, why were two paragraphs repeated in the story.«12345»
