Written by a 3rd grader with so many misspellings and grammar errors mading it difficult to read!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-26 10:57:32Thankfully I am not critical of the technical aspects and was able to follow the story really well. Keep at it and you will improve the technical aspects.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-20 13:03:34rape story improperly labled IF YOU PUT ANY KIND OF RAPE OR FORCED SEX IN YOUR STORIES YOU HAVE TO WARN THE READERS NOW DELETE THIS TRASH AT ONCEanonymous readerReport 2011-05-26 20:22:55What a mess! Hot xxx Written by a 3rd grader with so many misspellings and grammar errors mading it difficult to read!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-26 10:57:32Thankfully I am not critical of the technical aspects and was able to follow the story really well. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-20 13:03:34rape story improperly labled IF YOU PUT ANY KIND OF RAPE OR FORCED SEX IN YOUR STORIES YOU HAVE TO
