The small amount of character development really strengthened the story even though it was short. Hot xxx 18 The small amount of character development really strengthened the story even though it was short. It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» The small amount of character development really strengthened the story even though it was short. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-02-09 22:25:58that was wonderful you should make more of thesesanonymous readerReport 2010-08-24 20:04:51i think it was awesome i love vampires story even gay ones i also love werewolf story will there a 2nd part of the storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-05-28 13:46:05Decent story. Keep at it.READERReport 2007-01-24 14:06:01Good first try. It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12»
