🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. XXX Hot 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. Next, never write something cliche like `Enough about me`, especially when you have barely written a paragraph about the character. Still, pretty good, I’m just here to make it better.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:50:39the story built up nicely until you got to the sex part and then it went along too fast with a poor description of the sex itself. . . . . . … Still, pretty good, I’m just here to make it better.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:50:39the story built up nicely until you got to the sex part and then it
