I got lost within the first 15 sentences – not worth the time to try and follow – – punctuation really helps if you really want it to be read«1» Maybe labeling it “Proof read & Sectoined” Again thanks for a great story.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:53:55Perhaps a geography lesson is necessary here. Please break it down into readable sections so I may enjoy reading it again. XXX Hot 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 12:25:16Very hard to read clumped together as it is BUT a great story. Venice, Athens and Istanbul are NOT on the Baltic Sea. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 12:25:16Very hard to read clumped together as it is BUT a great story. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 12:25:16Very hard to read clumped together as it is BUT a great story. Venice, Athens and Istanbul are NOT on the Baltic Sea. Maybe labeling it “Proof read & Sectoined” Again
