It’s easy giving remarks, isn’t it?READERReport 2004-10-03 21:39:07English is obviously not your first language is it? Hot xxx Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1» And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. Good try tho. And as for Adamon, at least Zafar Ullah tried… And as for Adamon, at least Zafar Ullah tried… Good try tho. You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-07-09 06:13:22Keep on writing, interesting as a wholeREADERReport 2005-02-23 11:08:55My 8″ strap on will really make you wet.READERReport 2005-01-06 07:30:20THIS SHIT SUCKS WORST THEN A HARRY POTTER BOOK!READERReport 2004-10-12 10:51:37Great story. And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1»
