31 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-14 11:19:42Yes, your writing skills are very poor and I will give it to the other critics for that. XXX Hot HD Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. As far as the content. The poor sad twats who rant at you seem to be too fucking stupid to realize that fiction means it’s not fucking real and it didn’t fucking happen, it’s just words loonies.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 18:24:57Erm…kinda sick tbh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-12 23:41:15XD a four year is not to young
=P I know if i had a daughter it would be like this everynight«12345» It has a great potential to be a good story. 31 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-14 11:19:42Yes, your writing skills are very poor and I will give it to the other critics for that. The poor sad twats who rant at you seem to be too fucking stupid to realize
