dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! There was no change is style between the different characters. XXX Hot Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. SHIT. This became confusing after awhile. dude, dont copy! The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. This became confusing after awhile. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. This became confusing after awhile. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females
