And also switching from first to third person view.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-23 03:05:20Hard to enjoy the story with the horrendous spelling and the switching back and forth from first person and third person perspectives.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-09 23:43:04It feels like The Dead Zone and Fucked Out of Coma had a kid.«12345» Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Catmandue53Report 2017-01-04 02:59:44Never, ever, have I seen such horrible spelling. Hot xxx Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Catmandue53Report 2017-01-04 02:59:44Never, ever, have I seen such horrible spelling. Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 12:05:18A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 12:05:18A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit.
