thank you.jakthemessiahReport 2009-08-18 21:41:42Dude… 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. XXX Hot HD The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. Or are you now over them? Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. They ALL need work.«1» Would like to hear further adventures. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. Or are you now over them? But, you are a very talented writer. Would like to hear further adventures. But, you are a very talented writer.
