If the paragraphs were chopped down to much smaller ones, it would be easer to follow, from the end of one sentence to the beginning of the next. However, on a computer screen it is hard to follow the lines in a large paragraph. XXX Hot HD 14 comments«123»IRONDOCReport 2018-01-06 16:51:06Hahaha… What’s with all the grammar and space addicts ?? And author, it was fine I read it ok don’t worry…Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-27 23:17:21I am 72 years old. However, on a computer screen it is hard to follow the lines in a large paragraph. 14 comments«123»IRONDOCReport 2018-01-06 16:51:06Hahaha… And author, it was fine I read it ok don’t worry…Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-27 23:17:21I am 72 years old. You got the gist of the story folks, its not a published work just someone having a go. Ffs ! The paragraph spacing and organization is probably correct in textbook journalism.
