Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us. I think your writing style sucks. XXX Hot HD oh and who the fuck is danielle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-10 22:49:03The setup needs either more focus or elimination. it would have been alot stupider if amber just moved in for no apparent reason, and the grammer was not that bad, well atleast not bad enough that i actually had to try and interpret things, as i usually have to on this siteAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-11 13:42:20Ok, I’m gonna be very honest with you… and give the guy a break about the justice system thing, he obviously doesn’t know, but i respect him for trying to use it as a backstory. it would have been alot stupider if amber just moved in for no apparent reason, and the grammer was not that bad, well atleast not bad enough that i actually
