Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. so hot and dark! Hot xxx 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. No build um. so hot and dark! Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …xxxx«1» The final thing is Cho is a year ahead of Harry, so for her to be there it would need to be his 6th year or expand upon Cho falling apart and failing a year after C Cedric died. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …xxxx«1» There is a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major. The final thing is Cho is a year ahead of Harry, so for her to be there it would need to be his 6th year or expand upon Cho falling apart and failing a
