Not a lot of buildup, but it really doesn’t need it for the story to be good. Hot xxx 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… I look forward to reading the next part.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 09:35:32hot, however i do wish there was more character description in the beginning«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… I look forward to reading the next part.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 09:35:32hot, however i do wish there was more character description in the beginning«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 13:59:33Great story… Job well done. Job well done. Not a lot of buildup, but it really doesn’t need it for the story to be good. I like the fact that you write them so quickly and there’s no drop in quality as the series progresses.
