Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. He nvr said it was real. XXX Hot HD Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. And erm (01-03-05). He’s only 11 when he wrote it! He nvr said it was real. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. 43 comments«12345»Kiba SnowpawReport 2019-03-10 10:27:15I’m terrible at writing stories, but I’m pretty sure I could do a better job than this.
