Although the story is very short (in my opinion) and rather quick and precise to the point, I am very pleased with the results, of which were instituted by Phoebes’ father’s war-enduced nightmares. My displeasure was two, 1) being the shortness of the story and lack of much detail, i.e., Jake’s lack of a wife (or Phoebe’s mother)etc.; and, 2) that the story dialogue not written about virgin sixteen year old Phoebe not being consummated by pregnancy when her father fucks her bareback…at least for the first couple times. XXX Hot HD The word “gran” was mentioned but there was no explanation nor reason! The plet/theme of the story is great, the characters play their parts were well, and the story is pretty much error free!
