the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. Otherwse awesome stories!! Hot xxx 18 18 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-14 04:44:56I wish u would make second ones to the other ones doe. nothing too big though, we all get the picture. the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. nothing too big though, we all get the picture. I hope you coninue to write because you are very talented.READERReport 2007-12-26 13:13:39U R Fingr fucking goodREADERReport 2007-12-22 21:43:54youre an amazing author, you should write more of this story…its just like love and basketball, or brown sugar, or the playas ball…i really enjoy all of your stories. keep up the good work!«1234»
