8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-08 00:31:23gramar ruined it, and i thought it was suppose to be at a movier theaterAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 09:51:32Ok writing but having up to three tenses in the one paragraph I found too off-putting. XXX Hot HD Taking any requests for ideas to continue the series…thanks for reading«12» Taking any requests for ideas to continue the series…thanks for reading«12» Please stick to past or present, too disturbing otherwise.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-25 00:41:00movie theatre?Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-05 10:54:08dude this is great keep writingjgame316Report 2008-10-26 23:46:40If you read the series you see why I went this route. …will have chapter 5 soon. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-08 00:31:23gramar ruined it, and i thought it was suppose to be at a movier theaterAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 09:51:32Ok writing but having up to three tenses in the one paragraph I found too off-putting. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-08 00:31:23gramar ruined it, and i thought it was suppose to be
